Editing

Truth: it’s almost impossible to clearly see our own work. The stories playing so vibrantly in our heads are in our blind spot on the page.

Why? Because our own knowledge of the story blocks the view. There’s actually a term for that: it’s called the burden of knowledge.

I know! It sounds crazy, but this is why you need fresh eyes on your work. Specifically, fresh eyes that know what they’re looking at.

That’s where editors come in. Not just to help you see what’s not on the page, but to help you get it there.

An edit is for writers who prefer to work on their own, who want a diagnostic and suggestions to make your work stronger and are confident they can take it from there.

Once we agree to work together, you will submit a completed intake questionnaire designed to introduce me to you and your novel, your manuscript pages submitted in standard manuscript format, and we’ll hop on a zoom call for a meet & greet and to talk about your manuscript.

Comprehensive Developmental Edit:
the deep-dive into the nitty-gritty of your novel

You will receive:

  • Personalized, professional feedback on all aspects of your manuscript in the form of a robust editorial letter summarizing your novel’s strengths and weaknesses at the foundational levels, including specific notes on narrative drive, show/tell balance, pacing, characterization, dialogue, etc. A dozen+ pages editorial letter is not uncommon.
  • In-line comments, suggestions and questions using Word’s track-changes tool in the manuscript itself.
  • Practical, specific suggestions for revisions that are aimed at making your story stronger and improving your skills as a writer. This includes links to articles and/or resources specific to your needs.
  • A follow-up call at the end to discuss my feedback and answer any lingering questions. This call is optional. Some folks prefer to communicate by email, and that’s okay too.

Note: While I may point out grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors the first few times they occur, this edit IS NOT a copy edit or proof read.

Your Investment: $0.03 per word (approx $1800 for a 60,000 word manuscript)

If you decide to continue with coaching support after getting my feedback, you can move directly into a 1:1 coaching package and receive the first session FREE.


Manuscript Evaluation:
the overview

You will receive:

  • A personalized, professional big-picture assessment of your novel’s strengths and weaknesses in the form of an 5-pages+ editorial letter.
  • No in-line comments.
  • Practical, specific suggestions aimed at making your story stronger and to improve your skills as a writer. This includes links to articles and/or resources specific to your needs.
  • A follow-up call at the end to discuss my feedback and answer any lingering questions. This call is optional. Some folks prefer to communicate by email, and that’s okay too.
  • Your Investment: $0.02 per word (approx $1200 for a 60,000 word manuscript)

If you decide to continue with coaching support after getting my feedback, you can move directly into a 1:1 coaching package and receive the first session FREE.