Bring Your Story to Life
Your draft is the start of something powerful -
let’s shape it into a novel that moves readers and makes an impact!
The Problem:
You've gotten feedback and you're feeling completely overwhelmed. You've been tinkering away, but you don't know if the things you’ve been 'fixing' are actually the things that are wrong. You're worried you're making it worse, instead of better. Also known as the revision cycle of doom. Ever heard of revision hell? This is it.
Or maybe you aren't in revision hell. Maybe...
You have a message - something important about the world that you want the reader to walk away with, only you don't know how to get it onto the page in the way the reader will relate to.
Or it could be that...
You've started a draft with great intentions but the story has lost focus. It's out in left field somewhere, and you don't know how to get it back on track.
The Solution:
As your book coach, I guide and support you through the process of taking a holistic look at your manuscript, teaching you how to assess the critical elements so we can see what's working and what isn't, and making a plan of action - a roadmap - for your revision.
Finally, I coach you through the rewrite as you make the needed changes on the pages themselves.
The bottom line? You don't have to figure it out all by yourself. I've got you!
What Professionally-Minded Writers Know:
The work of revision is where the magic happens, where your story idea is transformed from a collection of scenes and characters into a book that WORKS.
Kind Words from Clients
I'm thrilled with the suggestions she's made to make my writing, characters, and story stronger.
I met Nita by chance when we exchanged pages on the Women's Fiction Writers' Association website. Myself a long-time professional editor, I quickly realized I was in the hands of a naturally gifted editor by the type of feedback she was giving me. I immediately hired her to edit the rest of my book, and I'm thrilled with the suggestions she's made to make my writing, characters, and story stronger. I highly recommend Nita's editorial services.
Betsy Thorpe, author & editor
Nita gave me the tough love I needed in the gentlest of packages
No question I had was too trivial or too difficult. A master listener, she stuck with me like a rock through a gamut of emotions until I fully understood her feedback. If you work with Nita, you’ll become a better writer.
Krista Lynn White, author
When my motivation starts to dwindle, Nita always inspires me to get back on track.
Nita Collins is everything I was looking for in a developmental editor. Her reviews always arrive promptly and are very thorough and insightful, providing plenty of positive reinforcement along with gentle constructive criticism. She is very knowledgeable and backs up her recommendations with links to appropriate references. Never harsh or critical, she is, nonetheless, honest and does an excellent job of highlighting problems and making helpful suggestions for improvement. When my motivation starts to dwindle, Nita always inspires me to get back on track. She is warm and responsive, and I highly recommend Nita Collins without reservation, five stars!
Dr. Wendy Schaenen
I loved working with her.
Nita's insight on the writing process was very helpful. She showed me what my project needed, and gave me the extra push I needed to get back on track. I loved working with her. She’s positive and encouraging.
Kim Baccellia, author
I am so grateful for her skills in helping me hone the story I have to tell.
I am so fortunate to have Nita as a critique partner. With her innate skill, she pointed out places where readers would benefit from being inside my character's head and heart. She also, in her inimitable way, affirmed the specific gifts I have in writing and firmly addressed the major fear and shortcoming that undermined my story and its ability to attract potential readers. I am so grateful for her skills in helping me hone the story I have to tell.
Lisa Bodenheim
Nita was an absolute joy to work with.
She was communicative, available, and willing to work around my schedule. Her feedback was thorough, insightful, clear, and delivered with just the right balance of kindness and brutal honesty. I can't recommend her highly enough!
Natalie Dale, author
Nita's developmental edit of the first thirty pages of my manuscript was extremely helpful. She provided insightful comments on the theme and other foundational elements as well as detailed line edits to highlight areas for improvement. Her suggestions were delivered with kindness, encouragement, and enthusiasm. I highly recommend her services.
Cheryl Hystad
Nita has made me a better writer. Simple as that.
She’s brilliant at showing versus telling, is detail orientated but can still see the big picture. If this is your first book, or your fiftieth, you will become a better writer with Nita by your side.
Holly Kerr, author
Nita's evaluation of my manuscript was empathetic and insightful. Her input was professional and constructive and it has consistently pushed me to think more deeply about the story I've written. I would be more than happy to work with her again and sincerely recommend her to anyone looking for an editor or writing coach.
Susan Morris
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