Blue Pencil Session

This is a great option if you’re wondering what my style is like before going all in on a full developmental edit or coaching package. It’s also good if you just want to know if you’re getting your story off on the right foot.

And pssst…a blue pencil session also makes a great birthday or Christmas gift for a writing friend! 😉

What is it?
A blue pencil session is an audit of your first 10 pages (up to 3000 words) and mini-blueprint*.

What you receive:
Personalized, professional feedback including what’s working and what needs attention in the form of an editorial memo.

Your pages marked up with comments/questions/observations/suggestions as appropriate in MS Word’s tracked changes/comments tab.

A list of curated resources as needed.

One 45-minute coaching session via zoom to go over my feedback & answer your questions.

Your Investment: $99

*The mini blueprint is designed to show where important fundamental elements are firmly in place and where decisions still need to be made or clarified. Because it’s only one page, it forces us to focus on the core elements – the beating heart of character and story.